NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 8

This is my first poem of the National Poetry Writing Month or NaPoWriMo. Given that it is eight days in to the month, I’m a little behind the eight ball because life has thrown me some recent curve balls. But…I say better late than never!

Today’s poetry prompt was to write a poem that centered around an encounter or relationship between two people (or things) that shouldn’t really have ever met – whether due to time, space, age, the differences in their nature, or for any other reason.

It seemed only fitting then that today I would write about our solar eclipse. Here we only experienced 98.6% totality, but just south of us, there was 100% totality. It is an unlikely and rare encounter, and so, by my estimation, quite suitable for this prompt.

Eclipse

The unlikely meeting
of the moon and the sun
cast a spell over earth.
Amicable but arresting,
the friendship seemed
as deep as darkness
and as cool
as a crisp autumn day.

Only a thin veneer
of light could be seen
in the tension
between darkness and light.
But the light
(or perhaps the darkness)
brought us together—
witnesses of a chance rendezvous—

where two old friends
passed through the shadowlands.
It was not the friendship
that drew us in;
it was the fact that
in their unlikely harmony,
we found solace
in the serendipity.


—cjpjordan

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