
Today’s prompt was to write a poem using Robert Frost’s “The Road Not Taken” as inspiration. So here’s my stab at it. Let me know what you think in the comments below and follow me for more of the same.
Even Now
I dream of immense white sand
rolled out beside a rocky
shore, piles of dunes rising like
mountain castles--like places
of refuge for the weary.
Even now,
I see the whitecaps riding
on the backs of waves when
their weight grew too burdensome
to carry, the slow rhythmic
mesmerizing ebb and flow.
Even now,
I feel each deafening and
weighty expectation, my
mind thick with hesitation
and uncertainty, my heart
knowing what the stars demand.
Even now,
I taste the salty sweetness
of tortilla chips and wine—
each bite and sip reminding
me of two divergent roads,
yellow wood and deep longings.
Even now,
I know the bittersweet call
of tragedy and regret—
the burden of longing for
more of life—and the lovely
dance of stars begging a kiss.
Even now,
I wonder what could have been
had we listened to the sun
singing brightly somewhere off
the curve of horizon, to
the moonless night sky’s bidding.
Even now,
when the driftwood still dances
with rock and sand in a large
coffee table box kept as
a ballroom for such affairs,
I wonder what might have been.
Even now.
--A Draft by Carla Jeanne Picklo Jordan
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