
Today’s prompt: Write a “loveless” love poem. I wasn’t allowed to use the word love! And I also had to avoid the words flowers and rainbows or thunder, rain, and lines beginning with a plaintive “why”?
I had to try to write a poem that expresses the feeling of love or lovelorn-ness without the traditional trappings associated with the subject matter.
So what better analogy than a car wreck? A bit morbid, perhaps, but I think it works. 😉
Collision
Sometimes a car wreck
is the most telling—
Oh those crunched quarter panels,
that bashed in bumper,
that terribly trashed trunk lid,
the tetris-like profile of the wreck.
It's all-telling
and (mostly)temporary.
Ah, but the impact of collision—
that sudden crash of constellations,
that clashing chaos called conflict,
those cataracts clouding up clarity—
well, that can last forever.
-A Draft by Carla P Jordan
Who rocks your world?